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jaded

Shall I hide here in plain sight
Or spread my wings and take to flight

In the darkest corner of my soul
I dare my being to become whole

To know the truth may drive me mad
Am I evil or only sad

The truth eludes in every way
Should I survive another day

Alone and confused in my jaded mind
I look too deep what will I find

Fear of the truth inside of me
Alas it is but the truth that sets us free

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  1. Date: 6/30/2011 4:31:00 AM

    Congratulations Russell for your win in the contest of Brian Strand "Up To Thee". Love, Carol P. S. I was away and missed congrats on many of Brian's contest. I try but don't know if I will ever catch up.

  1. Date: 6/10/2011 1:37:00 PM

    a very interesting one full of reflective thought. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/10/2011 9:34:00 AM

    ahhh you took my advise, how nice! and it certainly is a winning write, thanks so much for stopping by and commneting on my verses lately! Hope you are giving Ask Alice a try? Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/10/2011 6:01:00 AM

    Congrats Russel on your third place win in Brian's contest.. a dynamic write luv..

  1. Date: 6/7/2011 7:34:00 AM

    Jaded...would be a good title! Russ we change constantly on a cellular level we are completely changed by the end of every 7 years ;), our experiences change us too, so go have some experiences YOU feel will chnage YOU in the direction YOU want to go! Light & Love [Look how Alice changed by DREAMING...please enter my Ask Alice contest...only one slight refference to the books or charaters or setting is necessary...free fall...with the topic!] Light 7 Love

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 5:25:00 AM

    Very deep, like the way you are thinking wioth this one. Welcome to poetry soup.

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 4:25:00 AM

    You are greatly welcome to these wonderful home wishing best of luck in every of your attempts ----luv---- kelechi.

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 4:20:00 AM

    Nice piece

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 4:17:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Russell. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol