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The Potter's Doll


'Twas  years  ago,  my  little  potter  girl,
  Her  tiny  hands  shaped  a  lump  of  clay.
   Little  fingers  in  artistic  moves  swirled,
    Sculpting  the  wet  earth  for  many a day.
     Just  a  single  thought, for her mother it was.
      A  girl  then a  fusion  of kitten and a bird,
       Grave  thoughts  them she'd whittle away.
        So  tranquil,  so  composed  her  art;
            Wondered  how  this  figure  she  carved...
               Gently as she  lifted  it  out  from her box,
                 Uncovered  her  treasure,  A  Clay  Doll--
                   Like  an  unpainted  relic,  raw in  form.
                     She  sat  with  hands  folded  in  her  lap,
                        The  swell  of  her  long  skirt  falling  around.                     
                         Unsmoothen'd  hair was  tied  in  a  knot,
                          From  her  ears  drooped  two  little  round  bobs.
                          On  her  face  she  had  put  a  nose,
                           On  her  bosom  had  placed  a  whorled  rose.
                           Wasn't  surprised  that  her  inspiration,
                            As  spoke of Romulus-Remus and artifacts Harappan,
                              So  had  to  be  of  ancient  civilization.
                                 The  doll,  like a  figurine  from  antiquity,  
                                    An  image  of  her  purest  soul.
                                      Unglazed,  unburnished  form  of  earth.
                                         In  its  quaintness, a  rare  beauty.  
                                           Has  imprints  of  a  little  artist's  hands,
                                             Her  delicate  fluid  touch  on  clay.




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3rd place in the contest
Written by Gautami Phookan
For nette's contest : " Anything Handmade"      

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  1. Date: 6/11/2011 6:22:00 PM

    See others want to know more too! That's why you won, keep us coming back for more Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/9/2011 3:50:00 PM

    Congratulations on your big win with this precious poem. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/8/2011 11:02:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Anything Homemade"contest Gautami. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/7/2011 11:06:00 AM

    Gautami, congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest with this beauty ;)

  1. Date: 6/7/2011 9:40:00 AM

    The imagery in beautiful gives sight to the reader. Enjoyed it much. Love, Vie

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 9:49:00 PM

    Glad to see this was on the winners' list, Gautami. Congratulations to you.

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 2:56:00 PM

    An intriguing write and such a worthy win! Awesome, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 1:31:00 PM

    Such an interesting write I wanted to know more about the person making the doll and the doll! Oh do write and tell me "inspiration, As spoke of Romulus-Remus and artifacts Harappan," how these 2 lost wolf boys and Harappan? effected her in making the doll? SO interesting [I can explain centering too if you like?] Thanks for your kind comments! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 12:29:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading ..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 10:36:00 AM

    Many congrats on your win, Gautami : )

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 8:46:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Gautami

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 8:46:00 AM

    Congrats Gautami on your exciting win in Nette's contest with this fantastic creation in poetry my friend.. enjoy with luv..

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 7:43:00 AM

    To happen upon an artifact such as this, would be the find of a lifetime....and stirs the imagination to another age. Lovely poem, Gautami! Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 6/5/2011 1:59:00 PM

    Wow, this is amazing Gautami -- I really enjoyed how you let the love shine through in this write--- and I like the formatting as well :) what a treasured work of art that is :) Wonderful and touching entry for Nette :)

  1. Date: 6/5/2011 1:16:00 PM

    Oh, Gautami, the story behind this poem touched my heart. It didn't matter what I made in school, my mother treated it like art. When I got older, I made all her clothes. She was very short and an odd size. You have a beautiful entry for Nette's contest, dear friend. Had a great time fishing and wish I were still out there on the sea. Did miss my Soup friends though. Love, Carolyn

    Phookan Avatar Gautami Phookan Date: 6/6/2011 2:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes Carolyn, mom's are complete emotional wrecks, everything and anything their kids make goes into safekeeping,my mom did this and I see that I'm no different.For the pattern to continue I still take my artwork and other stuff home knowing how she still treasures them.
  1. Date: 6/4/2011 4:30:00 AM

    intricately done and wonderfully scribed, gautami... thanks and huggs!

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 1:16:00 AM

    I would imagine Nette will find this one impressive! Great imagination you have here!! good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 12:42:00 PM

    You described everything about the potter in complete balance...most unique-filled with your culture--your history--all things that are different about you and me! I love the form too...the shape could be likened to the unshaped blob of clay. Just beautiful, Gautami. Gwendolen

    Phookan Avatar Gautami Phookan Date: 6/6/2011 3:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That's the beauty of different cultures Gwen,I like to think about this as 'we preserve our uniqueness, at the same time blending with harmony...like flowers in a wild life garden.' and also to learn about all different cultures, traditions, the languages,etc..is so wonderful..
  1. Date: 6/3/2011 12:41:00 PM

    Lovely, sweet write, Gautami : )