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Sweet Sorrow

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Sweet Sorrow

Crowded in this empty room thoughts flooding my mind
she let me down easily just to be kind. Heart broken up 
into two pieces one side is aching the other weeping. 
Butterflies not in my stomach but in my chest, but it's 
all over i failed the test.

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  1. Date: 6/5/2011 6:32:00 PM
    Hello, Kin welcome to the soup.. and sometimes sweetness kills... and hurts... I don't see what test you where under. Thanks for sharing,, and hope it gets better,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/5/2011 5:38:00 PM
    Enjoyed this read have a great day.

  1. Date: 6/5/2011 1:35:00 PM
    Thanks guys, this was my first time sharing my poem on the internet and you guys made me feel right at home. I will definitely post more.

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 2:52:00 PM
    Nice oxymoron in the title sweet sorrow, nice thought, Kin

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 10:05:00 PM
    last two lines are great!

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 4:26:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Kin. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 5:42:00 PM
    WELCOME here in the poetry soup .....write more...i want to read more from you,..this poem is so great... ***jun-jun