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I feel as though I've lost my way
my heads not in the game
unsure of where I go from here
or who and what's to blame

It settled on me like a weight
I feel a little smothered
not sure how I now escape
or if I'm even bothered

Maybe this is just a cloud
that in front the sun has past
that's left me standing in the dark
a night that seems to last

It's left me feeling empty
as though I've all but died
I fear there's nothing left to feel
that I've shriveled up inside

Maybe if I could change the past.....
but I can't rewind the clock
a soul without a heartbeat
is like a tick without a tock



June 2nd 2011

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  1. Date: 6/13/2011 10:26:00 AM
    You are very gifted and I am enjoying your pen so much

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 10:31:00 AM
    Thank you Emma for your comment and I am glad to find you here. LThis is very well done. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 12:37:00 PM
    Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them Emma. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol