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Walking straight away

Walking straight away
Nowhere to go
Crowded street
But empty way.

My mind hanged to a melody
Flying toward something unreal
But inside the real me
Is stable and safe

Nobody can understand
Nobody can even imagine
But I and myself
Like a treasure box

Step by step
I walk my life
I’m waiting for something
Too much undefined

I lost my past
I cannot reach the future
Flying and flying
With the ghost of my mind.

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  1. Date: 5/31/2012 5:39:00 AM

    A lovely poem written exactly one year ago today. - Happy birthday dear poem! :) :) - love from Norway and Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 12/17/2011 1:33:00 PM

    Congratulations on being featured this week. This reminds me of a poem/song by TransSiberian Orchestra "Heal My Soul". Both are full of ache for, as you say, "something". I enjoyed reading this.

  1. Date: 12/12/2011 7:38:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Patrizia. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/16/2011 7:13:00 PM

    Congrats on your feature Patrizia, enjoyed your write,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/13/2011 10:48:00 AM

    Congratulations on your featured poem this week Patrizia. Love, Carol

    Cohen Avatar Patrizia Cohen Date: 6/13/2011 11:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much!
  1. Date: 6/13/2011 10:15:00 AM

    My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Patrizia

    Cohen Avatar Patrizia Cohen Date: 6/13/2011 10:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot!
  1. Date: 6/1/2011 1:26:00 AM

    great verses i love the whole thing Luv*Skat