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Ain't no Sunshine anymore

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Ain't no Sunshine anymore

Ain't no sunshine
when you're gone

I miss your knockin
on my door

Sunset comes 
another night

empty pillow
by my side

My cold sheets
whisper your name

and the answer 
is the same

Love is just
another game

I see your face
I see your smile

You'd stay with me
for a while

from the cradle
of the sky

Blue moon
shadows lullaby

And i think of you
and i dream

Catch your heart
between my soul

your palms take me
to a stream

Pick the star
don't let it fall

once its lost
wishes are gone

Pick the star
and see it shine

I hold your hand
as you keep mine

The soft wind
breathes again

Is it him,Is it you?
Who is my man?

strong warm kisses
on my lips

as your cheeks
feel my caress

by these little
fingertips

Ain't no sunshine
when you're gone

and you've been gone
far too long,far too long

Ain't no sunshine anymore

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  1. Date: 3/4/2012 8:33:00 AM

    If love is a game, which are you? winner or loser or never competed? 'tis better to have tried and lost than never to have tried at all. Have a God day. Dave.

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 10:36:00 AM

    A sad but lyrical write. Well done.

  1. Date: 6/10/2011 1:20:00 PM

    Dear Celene, I'd be happy to hand over Banderas or Clooney if you'd give me Brad Pitt. I'm a sucker for his dreamy eyes. Clooney is prettier than most women I know and Banderas is a bit intimidating to me. But Brad... well, he could make my life complete. LOL Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/9/2011 10:35:00 PM

    Ps. Smile ~ “A Fave By A Fave ~ `Stay Beautiful`” ~ Bye!:) ~

  1. Date: 6/9/2011 10:32:00 PM

    Smile ~ “I Always Loved Those Tiny Little Loving Hands of `Your Beauties My Dear, Blessed & Beautiful Celene Cresent!!!`” ~ Such A Sweeet Softness Which Has Risen From Your Lovely Voice Since I First Met `Your Treasures` ~ Nothing Has Changed; `As Honeydew As Ever` ~ Love The Tender Pictures `Your Beauty` Paints ~ Thanks for The Sweeet Coms ~ Love, Always,`” John!:) ~

  1. Date: 6/9/2011 10:17:00 AM

    Hi, thanks for your comment on my most recent work. I really like this poem here. In the end all that really matters is love. Some play a game with love and that can be very cruel. I hope that you can find a real true love one day. It can happen, I assure you. Take care and stay sweet, Jancarl

  1. Date: 6/7/2011 9:57:00 AM

    nice work CC...I dont think that love is just another game though..Love is truly all that really matters..hope you are filled with it :) TAH

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 9:18:00 PM

    I love that song and you added some of your own sweet lines into this poem of longing. Hey, how ARE you, Celene. It always seems like ages! Congrats on your win. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/5/2011 11:05:00 AM

    Oh, sweet friend, I can really feel your longing in this poem. Bill Whithers should rewrite his "Ain't No Sunshine" song to include your lyrical verses. Even in the sadness, though, I can sense hope and that makes me feel happy for you. Love and blessings to a special lady, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 7:17:00 AM

    What a very sad write this is, Celene :( .. but still so beautifully written-- so nice to see you post a poem but I can't help but feel sad-- are you ok? I hope you are doing ok-- I am doing good, thank you-- sending you soupmail after... super hugs to you...

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 2:28:00 PM

    Ps. Smile ~ “Come Here, `Gimmie A Little Sweeet Tinkerbell Kissssss *^_#* Ahhhh!!!`”:) ~

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 2:24:00 PM

    *Smile ~ “Come Here Precious Tinkerbell ~ `Sssssh` ~ Don't You Cry Cause, Johnny's, Gonna Bake You `A Sweeet Cherry Pie` *^_#* MmM ~ `Sssssh` ~ Little Tumblina, Tis All Goood; `Love, Always,`” Your Peter Pan!:) ~

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 4:55:00 PM

    a wonderful piece you wrote here, i agree with James it is full of feelings in every word.

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 11:48:00 AM

    Your sun will shine through Celene, wonderful poem crammed full of feelings....:)