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Remedy

Whenever I'm around you,
my hot brain became cool.
Blood, bone, veins functions well.
Its a remedy to my sickness.

You're more than a girl to me.
You're more than a friend to me.
You're more than a wife to be.
You're more than a life to live.

If the truth can live in World,
the world could have been a better place.
If the true boys can be truly loved,
This game could have a better game.

Your love in me is such a truth.
If not believe will cause a lot of pain.
It discourage me of being good.
And the truth in me will gently face.

I make my heart to hate pretty princess,
to strengthen your love in my heart.
I tried to get to your class,
to have that love which i lack.

If i can weep for help for so long,
more than a child crying to his mum for candy.
If i can cudgel my brain for so long,
locking my heart in truth and be candid.

If my vein you left in pain,
and you take your helpful love away.
And pretense grew over your face,
You decide to hit me where it pain

And sleep became my enemy.
And your thought became my tightest friend,
but my thought you left begging,
You bringing many things to death.

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  1. Date: 5/31/2011 3:15:00 AM
    nicely done and well written akere luv*Skat

  1. Date: 5/30/2011 7:30:00 PM
    Awesome poem! Great job and full of emotion, sincerity and passion. ~Laura