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Empowered

It was amazing,
Words came gushing from his head,
Clamouring for the paper instead.

It was captivating,
Lots of words played to form a rhyme,
And on paper, they stood the test of time.

It was enchanting, 
With his words, I felt the sun's glow,
With his words, I saw pure waters flow.

It was overpowering,
His words made me see stars,
And cured my hidden scars.

It was astonishing, 
In his words, I saw his past, his present,
And what to him, the future meant.

It was perfect, 
In his words, I saw elegance, saw charm,
And I knew, I held dynamite in my palm.

And it's true, 
That though, there's power in the sword of a samurai,
There's more in the words of a writer.

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  1. Date: 1/6/2012 11:36:00 AM

    Loved the one before this and I think this one is great too. Love is a wonderful subject to write about and you have captured all the lovely feeling. P S Thanks for your sweet visit and nice comments! :)

  1. Date: 1/4/2012 12:56:00 PM

    Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Hassana. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 11:15:00 AM

    this art is outstandingly writing, i recommend it to others for their pleasure and learning. i can see you are from my country, keep the flag flying.

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 7:25:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Hassana. I wish you the best on your writing endeavors in the new year. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 4:31:00 PM

    the words of wisdom are strong as can be, tht's why this poem has captured me.

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 8:10:00 PM

    Empowered!!!!! That's exactly how i feel when i write, hear, and read poetry. I loved reading this poem!!!!

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 5:16:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Hassana. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 5/30/2011 12:43:00 PM

    Amazingly empowering Hassana! Nice meeting you here in poetry soup. Thank you for reading my poems. Dalila