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Suicide

Sitting in a corner all alone
No ones listening
No one knows 
The pain you feel
Or why you feel it
Not that anyone would believe it
"Your being overdramatic" they say
"Toughen up"
But you can't help 
The way you feel
For your pain
Is all to real

So to end the pain
You say goodbye
To the pain in your life 
To things that hurt you so
And to the people you will miss
It seems like a dream
One last motion, one last test
And then it's done
You finally did it
You relieved the pain
But you left behind your memories 
That will haunt me forever

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  1. Date: 7/14/2011 12:05:00 AM
    for anyone who hears "the click" ...this is difficult to read...necessary...but difficult. i commend you.

    p Avatar RAQUEL p
    Date: 8/8/2011 6:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thx
  1. Date: 5/29/2011 10:10:00 AM
    good :] i love the real emotion behind it

    p Avatar RAQUEL p
    Date: 5/29/2011 7:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank u :)
  1. Date: 5/29/2011 9:50:00 AM
    it so sad how many ppl feel that way

    p Avatar RAQUEL p
    Date: 5/29/2011 7:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes it is, I just lost a family member because of it. But thts he wonderful world we live in....