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This Time

This time you did say "Will you marry me?"
This time I did say "I will"
This time we did walk down the isle
This time we did say "I do"

This time you are my husband
This time I am your wife
This time it's together forever
This time there will be no retreat

This time we will surrender
This time only to each other
This time, yes, this time
This time is meant to be our time

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  1. Date: 9/13/2012 11:35:00 PM

    It's a great feeling to able to recognize, acknowledge, and own your time. Enjoy every moment! Beautiful!!!

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 10:28:00 PM

    this is so wonderful. and this makes a husband sure that he is not going to get left while things get hard. give david my greeting i haven't heard from him in a while also.

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 8:20:00 PM

    Dearest Joy, I'm glad I stopped by tonight and reading this lovely verse for David, I'm all smiles! Love to both of you, always, Annalise

  1. Date: 6/10/2011 8:23:00 PM

    Hiya joy please do post my poem, I am honored that you hold it in such high regard hugs, Bill

  1. Date: 6/10/2011 6:31:00 PM

    very romantice piece of lovely poetry, am happy for you both.

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 10:03:00 AM

    Dear Joy, I am so happy for you and David! I got your comment after I returned from vacation and am delighted for both of you. Have a long and happy life together! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 3:00:00 PM

    its yer TIME!

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 11:08:00 AM

    Hey there Joy, congratulations to you and David! May God bless your union ;) a lovely write you have here and I am happy to see you back at the Soup ;) love Wilma

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 3:04:00 PM

    wow. did i miss something or did a wellington turn into a smalling while i was'nt looking. congradulations. and i hope that this time that faith in each other is the glue that makes it stick. never think or speak of leaving. be the one God spoke of. john

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington Date: 5/31/2011 8:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks john loving iii, we love too and God bless you.
  1. Date: 5/29/2011 8:27:00 AM

    Wow! Joy, when I saw your name attached to, Smalling. I dug in here to read real quick... congratulations.. I see true love does exist. I will forever admire you.. God bless you and David, THIS TIME, and forever... take Care.. your news and happiness is beautiful... p.d.

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington Date: 5/29/2011 6:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks PD. Our story is indeed a true love story, we appreciate your kind comments. Love always. Joy (Jew)