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phalanges lost

super nova eyed fish 
If served for dinner O how large a dish 
Is it speckled freckled can it blush
trying to catch it 
my hands in a rush 
the line caught and in a fit
I put my hand within it
phalanges lost 
no more fishing lines can I toss

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  1. Date: 5/28/2011 9:16:00 PM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site as u share your creative poetry luv..

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 9:10:00 PM

    What a terrible accident you describe...but one that we can picture vividly from your well done poem. Good work.