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warm water flows

her body nude and wet 
glistening water down her back 
a smile follows a hint 
her flesh a beautiful brown tint
a scream
a moan 
in the shower she stands alone



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  1. Date: 7/8/2011 7:09:00 PM

    Wow, this can have different interpretations. Could be like the shower scence in Phycho? I really like it. A belated congrats on your win with this one.

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 5:43:00 PM

    wow what a cool wrap up! Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 4:31:00 AM

    Congratulations Bias on your win in the contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/28/2011 3:25:00 PM

    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 10:03:00 PM

    Leaaves so much to each readers imagination. sensational writing. Many congrats on your FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 6/14/2011 5:56:00 PM

    B.fields, oooo that is all i am going to say... cause some shower heads are to expensive,,, and give hot water full force..ouch!... i'd be yelling to... enjoyed,..linda

  1. Date: 6/14/2011 10:48:00 AM

    B.fields, concise dreams had me forgetting the bathroom. ;-)

  1. Date: 6/13/2011 10:47:00 AM

    Congratulations on your featured poem this week Bias. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/13/2011 10:14:00 AM

    My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, bias