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Luck Incarnate

The Lucky Man in the Mirror

When I see her gorgeous face,
I am lifted. I'm alive. 
There's no feeling, thought or ecstacy,
That could rival her brown eyes.

And an hour is a second,
As if time had been defied.
And the clock is always frozen,
When I have her by my side.

When she approaches with a smile,
Any dreary thought can break.
I am baffled by her beauty.
I'm confounded by her shape.

Her brown hair is like a waterfall,
Flowing steady in its place.
My heart leaps from my chest,
When she moves it from her face.

And her lips, they are a mirror,
Where I see a lucky man.
They compel me to remember,
Just how fortunate I am.

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  1. Date: 6/13/2011 8:08:00 PM

    This was great Kyle but I wish you wrote about what you see about yourself.

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 8:26:00 PM

    a very sweet and beautiful write, filled with your true devotion and love,,wonderfully penned,,and Thank you for reading and leaving your words upon mine,,Blessings...Cecil

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 9:58:00 AM

    Kyle, i love this :) it's so beautiful.

  1. Date: 5/29/2011 1:38:00 PM

    Beautiful..:) thank you for the comment Smiles :@)

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 7:45:00 AM

    I beautiful love poem, lovely and welcome to poetrysoup~~

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 1:29:00 AM

    i love it my friend