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Pink Champagne Promises

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As softly sweeping serenities hair from placids beloved brow; enchanting

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Loving perfumed fingertips in tracing your cheeks, your lips, your perfect smile ~

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Falling deeper into your endless eyes their, mesmerizing velvet tides

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Glowing tranquillity amid your beauty upon these tender shores; lost once more...

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And where is the world to be found in waves of shimmering silence

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Whispers, washing upon the sands of timeless hearts; Her loves crystal waters ~

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...In “Pink Champagne, Promises.” *

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  1. Date: 6/10/2011 7:43:00 AM

    Dear Sarah,I will have SOUP MAIL CALL for YOU in a Couple of hours I've had a couple of strokes and my Comments are few YOUR Liege, with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER...HG

  1. Date: 6/10/2011 7:30:00 AM

    Dear Sarah, A very interesting Format I Like the Stars between each line The Verse so intense to Enwrapping the Heart " in waves of shimmering silence " SUPERB POETRY; I enjoy YOUR PEN YOUR Liege, with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER...HG

  1. Date: 5/29/2011 1:37:00 PM

    those beautiful eyes make me melt, and the sands of timeless hearts is so brilliant,,,,im just in a trance....

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 11:45:00 PM

    Absolutely stunning!!..Love, Maggie

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 5:13:00 PM

    Great work, John..Sara

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 3:47:00 PM

    Champagne will do it every time. Very tender and sweet. LOve daver

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 3:10:00 PM

    Sarah i love this Beautiful

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 1:01:00 AM

    Waiting eagerly* is there any game of dice in that eternal life*what do u think*......

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 8:58:00 PM

    now this is funny