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The Shallow Guts Of Men

I reel in dirt
through many eyes
-big eyes, small
eyes and terrestrial
eyes 
From afar in the
aquarius camp
whereas   
strewn at
each iring other,
men vying off 
And their sightseers
awkwardly squinting
nuts 
cooling off sudor
through the cove 
For there's no
spring wherewith 
recapitulate.

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  1. Date: 5/28/2011 10:52:00 AM

    Enjoyed this read today. Have a good one.

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 1:32:00 PM

    Lovely expressions on the shallow guts of man, but pay little attention to the form of crystalline, kelechi

    Emeaba  Avatar kelechi Emeaba Date: 5/28/2011 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh! thank you for reminding me have a nice day and God bless--------------kelechi. I actually wanted to use, carpe diem but since cyber cafe and my time was almost running off so I just click anything.
    Emeaba  Avatar kelechi Emeaba Date: 5/28/2011 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh! thank you for reminding me have a nice day and God bless--------------kelechi. I actually wanted to use, carpe diem but since cyber cafe and my time was almost running off so I just click anything.