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  1. Date: 6/30/2011 10:51:00 PM
    well, gosh, how did I ever miss this one?? It's really cool and the style is so fitting for a rain poem. I just read RAvindra's about rain.It must be raining a lot this year on your side of the world!

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 6:32:00 PM
    It is a pleasure to revisit your poetry Gautami...Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 3:29:00 PM
    congrats on your win in the contest, some vivid images in this one "jasmine drench in their hair", beautiful writing...

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 1:15:00 PM
    Gautami, I just love the lay out and imagery in this one.. congratulations on your win in Pd's contest ;) love WN

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 12:00:00 PM
    G.P., Congratulations 4 this wonderful entry!!!! Thank you once again, I'm always honored to have you support any of my contest. Don't miss out on my next one.. Take care,..p.d

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 11:34:00 AM
    Very cool layout here, Gautami. And the vivd details truly put me at the scene of rain....all the sights, smells and sounds. Especially the woody smell of pine. Lovely. Congratulations on your win~!

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 10:21:00 AM
    Many congrats on your win, Gautami : )

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 10:03:00 AM
    happy to see this wonderful write among the winners, Gautami :D congrats!

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 9:19:00 AM
    My congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., Gautami

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 8:12:00 AM
    Congrats Gautami on your excellent win in PD's contest with this awesome poem ..last post as great as all other posts my friend.. enjoy.. luv..

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 2:48:00 AM
    smashing, gautami... perky cheers for the amazing award!! :) huggs

  1. Date: 5/29/2011 12:21:00 PM
    oh! I totally enjoyed reading this Gautami! Sure seems like rain is inspiring most of us here-- this is a beautiful take on it and I love how you used that refrain and the spacing as well lends to that atmosphere of rain :) beautiful!

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 8:13:00 AM
    Nice descriptive work.There must be raining now where you are staying.Somewhere in Assam I guess.