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MY WISH

If I had one wish?
I would ask for a day
To say to my Dad, all I didn’t get to say
Everything on my mind
In every possible way

If I had one wish?
I would dance to hearts content
My emotions would not be bent
Because my father would be here.

If only one day I could rent…

If I had one wish?
I’d wish all time away
Without that record, we’d have longer days
Untracked time with loved ones
And just enjoy all life’s display

I would wish away Eve
And her eating from that tree
So that we all could live forever
In God’s kingdom, happy and care-free

I would illegalize “goodbye” 
Then it would never be in existence
Our loved ones couldn’t die
And we could find other reasons to cry

Oh
I have to pick just one you say…
Well I’ll condense them all together…

……..
If I had one wish?
I guess,
Eternal life’s the card I’d play

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Miranda Lambert
For Kristen Bruni’s contest: If I had one wish

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  1. Date: 6/2/2011 10:51:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this one...Great wishes that you have..Good luck in the contest with this one..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

  1. Date: 5/29/2011 9:46:00 PM
    touching me, randa! so awe-inspiring that winning is easy! superb job..:) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 8:58:00 AM
    A touching write, Miranda. Hopefully, by the grace of God, your wish might just come true one day! Good luck in the contest! Regards, Robert.

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 5:01:00 AM
    Thank you for the wonderful poetry you have posted and are sharing with us today Randa. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 11:17:00 PM
    * “Yesss * Eternal Life Would Be The Card I Would Hold Tight Unto Also * My Dear Beautiful Miranda. * Smile * Sooo Much Indiscribable Joy When I Reflect Upon Its Truth. * Hold Tight for One Day Your Beauty Shall See Your Precious Father Forevermore. * Very Beautiful Poem * Straight From The Heart * Hugs & Kissses * Kissses & Hugs * Sarah” *

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 9:00:00 PM
    very touching write Randa and a grand wish .. miss my Daddy to so can relate.. so many unsaid loving things.. good luck in the contest.. hope u enjoy a happy and safe holiday weekend luv..

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 3:32:00 PM
    Yes condense them all together! ...."Love Unraveled"...... Thanks for your poetry

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 3:22:00 PM
    this is great good luck in the contest cory