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Little Tree

Little tree pushing
skyward up through the dry dirt
wishing for water.

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  1. Date: 5/26/2011 8:06:00 PM

    Very nice touch to this haiku. My favorite form. Drop the capital for a more subtle effect. gave you a 7 anywho. Soup mail

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 3:10:00 PM

    Nice picture painted with good images, betty

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 2:05:00 PM

    ahhh, this is so cute!! Is it for wish contest too?

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 11:24:00 AM

    I am sitting here reading some very amazing poems today Betty. I am glad yours was among them. Have a wonderful day full of love and joy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 8:34:00 AM

    Very successful and evocative haiku...well done.

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 7:52:00 AM

    Lovely little haiku.