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When i was young, i dreamed of your heart,

to touch your hand, and create a new start.

Our date was short, i understand it now,

but it was your look, for i thought "WOW".

I trembled inside, that day that we met,

to look in your eyes, was so heaven sent.

Of all the moments, in sharing our life,

i wanted you more, to be my wife.

As we were together, our hearts grew as one,

you wanted a family, and said it was fun.

I want you to know, the gift you are,

its being a mother, the best gift thus far.

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  1. Date: 4/13/2012 7:14:00 PM
    Hi John Aaron...I am rereading this one...depth of emotion in this is intense...it's that oneness that makes it great poetry, ya know?...Sipping my herbal tea and trying to shake this darn flu!...I will have to go back and reread yours again til you get that pen a shakin'! :) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/10/2011 10:54:00 PM
    What a wonderful poem for your Christy, and did you change your Avatar or something? Maybe I am mixing you up with someone else! Anyway, thanks for reading my poems today. I'm glad I found this one about Christy.

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 4:24:00 AM
    Romantic and lovey, she must be very special.

  1. Date: 6/11/2011 3:01:00 PM
    Smile ~ “Sooo Sweeet Johnnie ~ This Love for Your Girl ~ `Tender` ~ Thanks for Stopping By & Glad I Could Take You Away ~ `Love to You & Yours,`” John!:) ~

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 4:09:00 PM
    Very beautiful tribute my friend. You did a wonderful job with this:)

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 3:35:00 PM
    More than inspired John, this comes from the soul of a great man. love always Anne

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 12:21:00 AM
    This is a beautiful poem about love .very Well crafted. I am sure christy will be very happy to read this .

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 10:25:00 AM
    I am sitting here reading some very amazing poems today John. I am glad yours was among them. Have a wonderful day full of love and joy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 4:50:00 AM
    sweet love poem for a lucky lady...

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 8:32:00 PM
    sweet one John with much expression .. impressive piece of romance my friend..luv..