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About This Poem

dewy petals white

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                              Dewy   petals   white,

                                              apple    in     every     flower--

                                       autumn's   backyard    red.





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8th place in the contest
For Carol Brown's Contest : "Apples? Oranges?"

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  1. Dietrich Avatar
    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 3/11/2012 12:47:00 AM
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    rereading this lovely one. It was sure a beauty!
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    T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet
    Date: 6/21/2011 3:16:00 PM
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    This was terrific Gautami I reall liked your congrats on my win so thanks and congrats to you to.~Teresa~
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    binibining P.iNk
    Date: 6/8/2011 8:34:00 AM
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    Smiles with this beauty, Gautami, love the contrast of the red and white-- super congrats on your win :)

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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 5/29/2011 11:26:00 PM
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    This one paints such a lovely picture. that is why I like it so much. Congrats on your win.
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 5/28/2011 11:52:00 PM
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    vividly portrayed.. congrats, gautami..:) huggs
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    Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 5/28/2011 8:43:00 PM
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    Congrats on your win..I enjoyed. BG
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 5/28/2011 8:43:00 PM
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    Congrats Gautami on a super win in Carol's contest.. another beauty luv..enjoy...
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 5/28/2011 4:11:00 PM
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    My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Gautami
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 5/28/2011 2:35:00 PM
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    congrats to you too gautami.
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    Charlotte Puddifoot
    Date: 5/28/2011 11:54:00 AM
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    congrats on your shared 8th place win with me, I think this is beautiful, love the image of an apple within each flower...
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    kash poet
    Date: 5/28/2011 11:15:00 AM
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    Loved it first time around.Congrats Gautami on your win...
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    jack horne
    Date: 5/28/2011 11:01:00 AM
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    Many congratulations on your win, Gautami : )
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    john freeman
    Date: 5/28/2011 6:52:00 AM
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    Gautami, great job, good to see you poem in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 5/28/2011 5:56:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your placement in my contest Gautami. I thank you so much for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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    delysia hendricks
    Date: 5/26/2011 11:08:00 PM
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    Awesome write. Good luck in the contest, Gautami. ^__^
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 5/26/2011 4:09:00 PM
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    wonderful Gautami.. very original creation ..good luck in the contrest.. an amazing analogy luv.. sweet.
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 5/26/2011 1:41:00 PM
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    A beautiful description of the transition from the white blossoms to the delicious red fruit, Gautami. Thanks for stopping by. Hope to catch some big fish and take some photos. Wishing you success in Carol's fun contest with this delightful poem! Love, Carolyn
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 5/26/2011 5:30:00 AM
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    Thank you for supporting my contest Gautami. Love, Carol
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 5/25/2011 10:38:00 PM
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    wow, this haiku rocks, Gautami!!
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 5/25/2011 7:13:00 PM
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    Wonderful entry to the contest, gautami
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 5/25/2011 12:53:00 PM
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    oh you got me right off, gautami... best winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
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    kash poet
    Date: 5/25/2011 12:22:00 PM
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    Your poetry always stands apart Gautami.Love the imagery here.Best wishes....


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