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dewy petals white

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dewy petals white

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                              Dewy   petals   white,

                                              apple    in     every     flower--

                                       autumn's   backyard    red.





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8th place in the contest
For Carol Brown's Contest : "Apples? Oranges?"

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  1. Date: 3/11/2012 12:47:00 AM
    rereading this lovely one. It was sure a beauty!

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 3:16:00 PM
    This was terrific Gautami I reall liked your congrats on my win so thanks and congrats to you to.~Teresa~

  1. Date: 6/8/2011 8:34:00 AM
    Smiles with this beauty, Gautami, love the contrast of the red and white-- super congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 5/29/2011 11:26:00 PM
    This one paints such a lovely picture. that is why I like it so much. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 11:52:00 PM
    vividly portrayed.. congrats, gautami..:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 8:43:00 PM
    Congrats Gautami on a super win in Carol's contest.. another beauty luv..enjoy...

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 8:43:00 PM
    Congrats on your win..I enjoyed. BG

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 4:11:00 PM
    My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Gautami

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 11:54:00 AM
    congrats on your shared 8th place win with me, I think this is beautiful, love the image of an apple within each flower...

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 11:15:00 AM
    Loved it first time around.Congrats Gautami on your win...

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 11:01:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your win, Gautami : )

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 6:52:00 AM
    Gautami, great job, good to see you poem in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 5:56:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in my contest Gautami. I thank you so much for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 11:08:00 PM
    Awesome write. Good luck in the contest, Gautami. ^__^

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 4:09:00 PM
    wonderful Gautami.. very original creation ..good luck in the contrest.. an amazing analogy luv.. sweet.

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 1:41:00 PM
    A beautiful description of the transition from the white blossoms to the delicious red fruit, Gautami. Thanks for stopping by. Hope to catch some big fish and take some photos. Wishing you success in Carol's fun contest with this delightful poem! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 5:30:00 AM
    Thank you for supporting my contest Gautami. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 10:38:00 PM
    wow, this haiku rocks, Gautami!!

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 7:13:00 PM
    Wonderful entry to the contest, gautami

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 12:53:00 PM
    oh you got me right off, gautami... best winning wishes! :) huggs, nette

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