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fountain of love

love me eternally
not for the moment 
love me for me
not for who you think i am 

in return
ill love you equal
ill love you as much as i possible can

L
O
V
E

are we capable loving another?
or is it a false sense used to keep evolution moving ?

time has moved us forward where relationships become relations
where relations only last a night long

love never lasts 
love turns to heart break 
heart break to hate 
hate which is next to love

i wanna find 
a fountain of love 
where it flows in abundance
and splashing against my heart

why cant we make love last?
we are selfish creatures who love our selfs more
or
maybe we don't love our selfs , so there for how are we to love eachother

  

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  1. Date: 5/24/2011 3:50:00 PM

    very creative write on love, Jessica

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 12:13:00 PM

    Thought provoking write. I believe you nailed it when you said we are selfish creatures. We are stuck in our ways and wants and there in lies the problem...well done....TAH