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Freezing Sensations

All freezing sensations
winged with my slippery 
confusions and day dreams
stumble over milestones 
on my way to nowhere
just to your world
housing bats and rats
that breed love for you probably.

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  1. Date: 5/24/2011 5:53:00 PM

    yes ,,,this is an intense write...ur talented brother !

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 4:07:00 PM

    Creative and brilliant write on freezing sensations, Chhutan

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 10:39:00 AM

    A deep write.Liked it.