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In your dreams

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In your dreams



The empire  of  my  Love 
stands on the pillar of your strength!
All judgement is yours
power and passion
a beautiful synchronization 
I follow your course
like a slave follows his master
chained with a desire to reach you
like a bird's aspirations for the sky!
every single breath I take 
your lustrous skin
causes reverberations in my heart
my heart melts
             
FOLLOWED BY A PERFECT UNION
  suddenly A TRAIN OF THOUGHTS
TRANSCENDS MY CONSCIENCE 
ONCE AGAIN I DIVE IN YOUR SEA OF DREAMS



copyright 2011 by Smriti Jha

  for a  very special one....

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  1. Date: 12/4/2011 4:52:00 AM

    A very lucky one too . Last stanza is beautiful ,well done!

  1. Date: 10/2/2011 1:19:00 PM

    I think a better title would be Diving into Your Sea Of Dreams. i will submit as such if this is O.K.

  1. Date: 5/30/2011 4:34:00 PM

    Smriti I love it , dramatic and full of emotion . Anne

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 9:47:00 PM

    Great Mystical Poem! Where are you writing from? Yours Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 11:29:00 PM

    LOVELY ONE

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 4:56:00 PM

    I FOUND DEEP LOVE COUPLED WITH A LITTLE CONTRADICTION..MARVELOUS DEAR

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 4:54:00 PM

    I FOUND DEEP COUPLED WITH A LITTLE CONTRADICTION...MARVELOUS DEAR!

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 6:32:00 AM

    Thank you for posting and allowing us to enter into your world of poetry today. The diversity of our poets and their poetry here at PoetrySoup is astounding. It was my pleasure to read your poetry today Smriti. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 4:19:00 AM

    such a wonderful write, you have within you, the power to change lives, and it is a gift from God..

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 4:05:00 AM

    Wonderful simiies throughout...I can just picture the panic as almost fear if a bird weren't allowed to reach the sky... Enjoyed this romantic write. Have a blessed day! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 7:44:00 PM

    Nice, "Chained with a desire to reach you"...loved it... ~Beloved Faizah

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 7:14:00 PM

    You have an interesting personality. Rebellious yet submissive in some regards..... I could read a thousand poems written by you and still find you complex and mysterious. You are a step above all poets.