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...“Emily Rose” *

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...“Emily Rose” *

I was standing there in the silence

Watching her from afar...

Far from the blinds of ignorance

The tombs, of narrow thought?!

A girl I had known many years ago

Years afore the darkened one's

Had come to maim her life...

Or at least, the sanity of her mind!?

Unfortunate this reflection; as I stood there

In silence as I watched, I thought

To those the simpler views; perceptions

With the painted eyes, of the shallow lives...

Caught in the web of perhaps, the forever lost?!

The damned I thought, as I stood there

In the silence, the silence

Until, the silence talked; ironic I thought...

As I smiled upon her Soul ~

Knowing the ultimate outcome, that shall befall the lost!?

Carried away, as I watched; as I watched

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...“Emily Rose” *






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  1. Date: 12/7/2011 9:27:00 AM
    This one is so filled with emotion. There is sadness and a sense of loss. A wish that there would be something you could do to change thingsfor the better. A fine write. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 3:41:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry.

  1. Date: 11/1/2011 5:11:00 PM
    Interesting thoughts penned..I especially like the line that says "The tomb of narrow thought"...I am glad that I chose this as one of the ones that I could read today..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/30/2011 7:05:00 PM
    A powerful write Sarah, the reader can't help feeling the quiet futility you express in this verse. Amazing range of emotions dear friend. PS Thank yo for your visits and kind comments - always so special! :)

  1. Date: 10/29/2011 12:27:00 PM
    a very lovely poem... very beautiful.. thank you,, for your lovely comment...