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The truth about my love for you

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The truth about my love for you

Your  ardent  love for me is a blessing in  disguise

sweet glistening love  I see  in your eyes

deep in my heart there is a secret

shall I open before you  those rivulets?

 streaming out of  inner cycles of mind...

would you listen to those four walls

 and would you be kind?

I  have not grown in years

yet  I  have  lived in fears.

I  wish to build those beautiful faith

on your caring shoulders ..

A  woman who cares for your heart

and hardly for your wealth...

this enigmatic dream has a serious goal

to create those little poets and little souls

we  are  united by a powerful force

unbreakable and tireless  in due course... 

..the harbinger of  our relationship

if  the world doesnt care too much

think of a woman who knows you

with due course of time

i will grow within you...

 

 

 
copyright 2011 by Smriti Jha
 
For the most beautiful Heart...!

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  1. Date: 7/2/2011 2:53:00 PM
    Beautiful. Ian Foley

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 9:33:00 AM
    hey smriti, thanks for your praise, i wish i had have written this one of yours it is very moving. rock on, dave

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 7:17:00 AM
    I could read this everyday and not tire of its beauty. Have you submitted this anywhere?

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 6:05:00 PM
    Smriti you have surpassed yourself on this one. It's as breathtaking as the others

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 1:58:00 PM
    Another lovely write , smriti

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 1:25:00 PM
    it is so loving as i read it, and is deep in its emotions, hope you are well, and god bless you...