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A Thousand Years From Now

For he who leans upon the ancient tree
In future’s shade, a thousand years from now
Will you engage a wrinkle in your brow
And ponder ore’ the death of fallen leaves?

Are we so not alike in fairness gained
Or time might choose to forge us enemy?
Would cloak, or hair, or skin, a different blend
Invite those eyes to shun away from me?

If first, those born, have greater weight to bear
Or yours, one day, the lift more heavy lot
Each step by step, we travel blind and torn
Do crossroads come the same or some are not?

Will one day find you leaning by a tree
And find a stone beneath the powdered dust
And wonder if it once belonged to me
To think it bone, or questions turned to rust?

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  1. Date: 5/9/2013 1:22:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. Deservedly so for this free verse is like a fountain of liquid gold.

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 9:13:00 PM

    Carrie, a nice little free verse poem :-) congratulations~ LINDA

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 8:32:00 PM

    Thanks for submitting it to my contest. This is a wonderful piece of poetry. Kim

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:56:00 AM

    I just stumbled onto your poem. It is an incredible write. It is absolutely wonderful.

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 1:44:00 PM

    congrats!!! nice poem :)

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 11:29:00 AM

    Carrie,congrads on a brilliant win!

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 11:29:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Metaphoric Time" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 6:27:00 PM

    Holy Cow! I was not expecting to read a masterpiece in this winners list! : ) What a breathtaking flow! Exceptional! Congrats on your win, Carrie! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 4:21:00 PM

    CARRIE,;-) congratulations with your wonderful win in my contest~ take care and have yourself a wonderful Fathers Day,~ xox~PD

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 7:11:00 PM

    Wow. That is beautifully written. I enjoyed it. Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 1:28:00 PM

    Thank you for sharing with us this wonderful poem. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 9:53:00 AM

    A very interesting poem and worthy of a great win... You are truly gifted.

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 11:18:00 PM

    Sooo beautiful, Carrie. I can see why it won in the contest. You are a very talented writter. I feel so honored that you sent beautiful comments on my poems. Good luck on all contest you have pending! God Bless, Avis

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 2:16:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win, Carrie. Very well written poem. Cheers, Maureen

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 10:55:00 AM

    Wow Carrie, deep as rivers and seas, congrats. on your big win, love,vie

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 10:03:00 AM

    Carrie you are amazing,always loved your work.. Super Congrats on a very well deserved win. love gautami

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 5:03:00 AM

    ((())) Clap! Clap!..Great work..Congrats on your big win! Sara

  1. Date: 1/12/2012 9:30:00 PM

    A beautiful poem, Carrie. Well deserving of this excellent win. Congratulations on your win in the PS contest. Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 1/12/2012 12:59:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win! Wonderful poem!!

  1. Date: 1/12/2012 12:40:00 PM

    I heartily congratulate you on your poem winning in August 2011 competition. You really deserved it. I am in awe to read the poem. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 10:43:00 PM

    This is simply beautiful, Carrie. Much congratulations on your fantastic win, well deserved, Greg

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 3:33:00 PM

    Carrie-This is just fantastic and I am so very happy for your and your big win! A huge congrats. from me!

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 2:25:00 PM

    This is a classical beauty, Carrie. Excellent win! STrong message regarding the passing of time! Congrats congrats congrats! Such an honor! GWendolen

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 12:55:00 PM

    And you know what, Carrie? A thousand years from now, this will still be remembered--- I've mentioned before how you are such an amazing talent, you I think can do any form well! Super duper congrats on your win, so happy for you! I really enjoyed reading this beauty again, and thank you so much for your heartwarming words in mine :)---I'm still not done folding those cranes though, hopefully I get to finish it this year :) Hugs to you!! :D

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 12:09:00 PM

    Carrie, I remember this poem. You did an outstanding job with the Iambic P. Congratulations on your win in the Int. PoetrySoup contest!

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 11:53:00 AM

    Seen this one before, Carrie, and commented. Will simply say. Congrats on the win. You be special. Love, daver

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 9:05:00 AM

    Carrie, pleasure to see your win, my friend, A big "Congratulations" Beautiful and worthy poem win. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 5:41:00 AM

    Carrie this is wonderful, a poem, the three masters Shelly, Keats and byron, would have been proud to have written. harry

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 5:06:00 AM

    Congratulations on your 3rd place win in the Poetrysoup International Contest for August 2011 . Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 3:34:00 AM

    Many congrats Carrie on your well deserved win. This is a beautifully written and thought provoking piece. Best wishes Em :)

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