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9:30

Singing for the river is a bless.
The love theme’s incarnated in a dress,
There are more than words that I should guess,
And I won’t expect from you anything less,
Just start the peace and end this mess,
So I won’t make my heart to press,
To commit such error to forget the stress,
Oh your lips are touched by my soft tress,
And I don’t know your love how to access,
And neither how I should confess,
If only I knew your Universe’s address…
Oh I am such a damsel in distress,
And all I do is to abuse in excess,




And all I do is to abuse in excess,
Oh I am such a damsel in distress,
If only I knew your Universe’s address…
And neither how I should confess,
And I don’t know your love how to access,
Oh your lips are touched by my soft tress,
To commit such error to forget the stress,
So I won’t make my heart to press,
Just start the peace and end this mess,
And I won’t expect from you anything less,
There are more than words that I should guess,
The love theme’s incarnated in a dress,
Singing for the river is a bless.


By Ana Bituna for the contest " Write A Backwards Poem".

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  1. Date: 5/29/2011 4:57:00 AM
    nice read.congrats. thanx. jagath

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 12:23:00 AM
    thank you all so much!

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 4:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Anna Bituna

    Bituna Avatar Ana-Maria Bituna
    Date: 5/24/2011 4:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much, it's a surprise for me ! a good one Thank you all!
  1. Date: 5/23/2011 5:28:00 AM
    Congratulations Ana-Maria on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

    Bituna Avatar Ana-Maria Bituna
    Date: 5/23/2011 5:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, i am honored to have been posted here my poetry. Thank you again Carol. From Ana-Maria
  1. Date: 5/20/2011 6:42:00 AM
    What a beautiful morning. The sun is finally shining, the birds are singing, and I am sharing my day with you reading your wonderful poetry. I hope you have a great weekend Ana-Maria. Love, Carol

    Bituna Avatar Ana-Maria Bituna
    Date: 5/20/2011 1:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much, and i wish you a happy weekend too.