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THE OLD MAN AND THE LORD

There was a certain very, very, old man of Stamford,

who was asked to appear before a very great lord,

his heart then beat very wildly,

and he jittered around madly,

he tumbled and died, and in heaven met the greatest lord.

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  1. Date: 5/24/2011 2:53:00 AM

    Segun,This is very humourous.You are a great limerick poet! Best wishes!

  1. Date: 5/21/2011 8:36:00 AM

    thankxx SEGUN for your very kind words on my poetry .. I find yours most enjoyable as well luv.. so much interesting info in a few lines speak so much.. enjoy your weekend ..

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 1:50:00 PM

    HI, segun. I like how he went from not meeting the lord on earth to meeting THE only Lord in heaven!

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 1:35:00 PM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your sweet creative write tonight..what a way to go and be in the presence of the Lord... hope u have fun on P.S. as u share with luv..

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 1:06:00 PM

    Very humorous and witty write, Segun

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 12:44:00 PM

    Reminds me of the title The Old Man and the Sea. The same effect was obtained in the end...he still got to meet his Lord. Gwendolen