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Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 5/18/2011 11:42:00 AM
    I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them Janet. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 9:49:00 AM
    The last line need to be worked more, yes. Money is like time. Not having a plan or having too much on hand can put you in a cave. Very expressive write.

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 9:30:00 AM
    A very nice and realistic write Janet.

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 9:28:00 AM
    I like everything in the poem, except for the last line. It weakens the poem. you might want to consider a last line, that is in keeping with the rest of the poem, with the same kind of language and imagery.