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The stars must be aligned

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The stars must be aligned

I lay here mesmerised by the sky so immense, 
Observing the stars that are so dense.
The stars must be aligned in this heavenly bliss,
However, I know just by looking, that one is amiss.

Save for those we use, as a birth sign, 
Some remain scattered and cannot align.
Because of this particular star so delicate and cherished,
A star that one’s desires are purposefully wished.

I know this star is meant for me,
To admire and only for me to see.
I gaze upon it for a while,
And it’s warm radiance leaves me with a smile.

How do I know one is missing may ask?
To count all those stars would be an impossible task.
This star I speak of cannot be sort after up on high,
For its twinkles originate, from the corner of your eye…..


**Thanks Wilma for the title I hope you like it**

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  1. Date: 7/6/2011 9:13:00 AM
    Lovely and soft Sid, you are quite the romantic! :)

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 5:37:00 PM
    Marvellous write ! I see ur unique in many ways ......! Regards

  1. Date: 5/21/2011 1:19:00 PM
    My stars are surely aligned today Sid so come celebrate my birthday with me luv ..as I am being spoiled and pampered all day ..and oh cannot wait for tonight..wow... u always make me smile with your great comments so welcome luv.. join in the fun via soup..luv..

  1. Date: 5/21/2011 3:12:00 AM
    Bravo on this work of art. I enjoyed this piece tremendously, homeboy. (Clap, clap). ^__^

  1. Date: 5/20/2011 7:44:00 PM
    wilma you lucky gal~ great pen my friend

  1. Date: 5/19/2011 7:34:00 AM
    Well I am here today my friend....hope you are feeling inspired again. Thanks for you comments and encouragement!

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 11:24:00 AM
    I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them Sidney. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 9:44:00 AM
    Wilma is great inspiration to create a poem and u have created a wonderful romantic write.. Sidney my friend.. beautiful imagery of the stars and sky and the last line is super duper luv.. look hard in the sky .. if u see one with a kiss on it ..it belongs to me as my husband bought me a star years ago and we named it ..what else? "Sweetheart"..oh..

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 8:34:00 AM
    Sid how can I not like it.. I love it!! Absolutely dig where you took this one ;) love W.. Ps.. Have to fav it too *p

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 7:16:00 AM
    gave me goosepimples. lovely