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  1. Date: 12/29/2011 10:08:00 AM
    dave .,.,m speechless .,.,really one has to say straight from heart .,.,.,.,the pain that u hv shown through this poem is easily recognisable .,.,.,.,the way u hv exprerssed the feelings in words .,.,really i always want to express my feelings through my poem the way u hv done .,.,.,

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 2:44:00 PM
    Written straight from the heart, I felt your happy you were blessed with such a wonderful step dad. You are an amazing writer!

  1. Date: 8/7/2011 6:52:00 PM
    Had to come back and read this again. It really touches the heart. Soup Mail David.

  1. Date: 7/28/2011 8:44:00 PM
    Such beautiful poetry, the menory of what you had and the blessing of what you now have. You put so much into this one and it is really good!

  1. Date: 7/27/2011 4:12:00 AM
    nice, very nice ,, thank you for commenting on my "Dawn of Time which was written for a true love who is gone from me now,, I truly like your words above ;} I lost my dad as well,,, many blessings!

  1. Date: 7/15/2011 4:48:00 AM
    Very good write. I only lost my father in 2004 but it still hurtd. When he was dying I also prayed to God to take his pain away or take me instead. So I can relate to this.

  1. Date: 6/5/2011 5:44:00 PM
    Oh! My this is very moving, now i think this is your 6 year old memories on surface and paper. I know the feeling of losing and feeling betrayed at a very young age. David, I'm over whelmed at the way you handled your pride. God, does answer even if we don't understand the results.. Your a prized poet... take care,..Linda H...

  1. Date: 6/5/2011 1:11:00 PM
    What a very heartfelt poem this is David, sometimes it does seem that way but what you say here holds so true-- things happening to us sometimes don't make sense at the moment but in time, the answers fall into place -- keep your strong faith in God-- thank you for sharing, David :)

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 7:32:00 AM
    Thank you for posting and allowing us to enter into your world of poetry today. The diversity of our poets and their poetry here at PoetrySoup is astounding. I am so happy I was able to read your wonderful poetry today David. Love, Carol