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How he killed her love

Here's a story, of a cheating con man.
Faithfulness, he does demand,
that's the way, hes got it planned.
He has her, eating from his hand.

He's a liar, and a cheat!
Gosh darn man, drives for weeks.
Never will be, hers to keep.
Better run girl! Its getting deep!


He's always gone, while shes at home.
His eyes, have been known, to roam.
While hes talking to her, on the phone,
all of a sudden, his service is gone!
He thinks, she will never know,
and besides, she wouldn't dare go.
Maybe, let a few tears flow,
Her true feelings, she won't show.


Hes a liar, and a cheat!
Gosh darn man, drives for weeks!
Never will be hers, to keep.
Better run girl! Its getting deep!


She wants his time and attention,
but this only causes, friction.
He wants her butt, in the kitchen,
and to stop, all that silly wishing!
Now, this girl isn't wise, for her years,
although, she knows, what she hears.
His unspoken words, only confirm her fears!
She just doesn't, Change his gears!

Hes a liar and a cheat!
Gosh darn man, drives for weeks.
Never will be, hers to keep.
Better run girl! Its getting deep!

Only so much, can she stand!
She wants a man, that will hold her hand.
Everyday, she won't live in dread.
A woman needs to, hold up her head!
Not worry about, her face being red...
Well now ,that's the story of
"How he killed, her love"
He should have, put her above,
not after, everything else, he does.
That's how, she became a was,
Cause, hes a liar, and a cheat!
Her heart no longer, his to keep!
Let the next one, kiss his feet!
This one has, admitted defeat!

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  1. Date: 6/14/2012 9:32:00 PM
    SUSAN

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 12:50:00 AM
    very powerful susan, David

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 2:28:00 PM
    I think I knew this man u write of...once upon a nightmare!! Congrats on this creative win. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 2:03:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest of paula, susan

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 1:28:00 PM
    Hurrah for her and for you for your winning poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 1:11:00 PM
    Congrats Susan on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this amazing creative write and entry luv.. enjoy your sweet success for excellence..

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 12:55:00 PM
    Congrats, Sue. Awesome piece. Nice going. xxxRalph

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 10:44:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 10:08:00 AM
    Kudos to you for the big win,susan... huggs

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 6:31:00 AM
    Thank you for posting and allowing us to enter into your world of poetry today. The diversity of our poets and their poetry here at PoetrySoup is astounding. It was my pleasure to read your poetry today Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 2:40:00 PM
    luv this poem alot!!! Scored you a 7. This powerful and moving and I luv the way you placed your words in great meaning in this poem. Wow!!!