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Abandoned By The Love That Struck So Close To The Core Of My Heart

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Abandoned By The Love That Struck So Close To The Core Of My Heart

It rips my heart apart
To see you behind bars
That keeps me away from you
I can't help the tears that keep falling
The pain strikes deep in my very core
I can't control myself
I can't move on from here
I am lost in the fear
I am drowning in a bitter sorrow
I am down on the ground
beaten to the bitterness of death that is among me
My health has shattered in pieces
I am so weak that my breath is no longer within me
I no longer have you near
I am alone 
I feel abandoned and lost
For you made the mistake and were taken away from me
No I stand here beaten and abused from the misery I must take
I have no choice then to lay here in the pain I bear
I found happiness though you memory still haunts me dear
I can't get over you
I can't move on from what you drove into the very heart of my existance
I can't escape the chaos you created
I can't lose sight to what you put in place when you disappeared.

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  1. Date: 5/25/2011 6:36:00 AM

    Congrats, Sarah, on the featured write. Heartfelt. Vince

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 5:25:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Sarah

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 5:24:00 AM

    Congratulations Sarah on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 7:41:00 PM

    congrats Sarah on your featured poem this week on P.S. a great piece to share with us all with luv..

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 8:53:00 PM

    I figured it out. Mourning mist you must not receive emails. well thank you and everyone for the comments I don't get a chance to respond to them all I should try a little harder. I do appreciate them all very much. sarah

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 8:49:00 PM

    I can't figure out how to email you guys. I'm pretty tired. I've been in and out of the er this past week. I can't seem to let go of my ex's its getting to me. It seems like I am so inspired but love though the pain of lost love still haunts me greatly. I am very inspired but still feel sorrow and mourn for the loss. sarah

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 8:34:00 PM

    good poem..i know how health is effected by things...i spent half the day in bed today..crappy day...I know what this feels like...