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JUST DROPPED IN


P arking my Harley near the doorway, we sauntered inside.
O ther than a lone microphone, I took the emptiness in stride.
E VENTUALLY the emcee asked what would be our order,
T hough it was hard for him to speak because of his goiter.
R eaching for my empty wallet was an INEVITABLE ILLUSION,
Y our CREATIVITY will be needed now, to prevent any contusion.

P erhaps I was mistaken, thinking I’d drop in for an alcohol INFUSION.
A lthough, the strong smell of pot just might ease that delusion.
L ooking all around the place for some small sense of sanity,
A fter that, the TV just went blank during a show called “Hannity.”
C ould this place, I wondered; be a “poetry palace” with an open mike?
E xcited, I ran out for the chap book I left on my trike.

By John Trusty

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  1. Date: 5/29/2011 2:49:00 PM

    Talk about a winner....Indeed...this is a wow wow ....as Oprah says...thanks

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 8:57:00 AM

    Congrats John on your fabulous win in the 'poetry palace' contest... gautami

  1. Date: 5/21/2011 2:53:00 AM

    Congratulations on your 3rd place win :o)

  1. Date: 5/20/2011 12:57:00 PM

    Thanks to Linda Marie for the placement in her contest and to all who have commented on the my effort. All the best. JT

  1. Date: 5/19/2011 6:54:00 PM

    Congrats John on your 3rd place win in the contest.Enjoyed your poem.

  1. Date: 5/19/2011 4:08:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congratulations..Sara

  1. Date: 5/19/2011 12:27:00 PM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest J T. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/19/2011 9:37:00 AM

    Enjoyed the humor, John. You thought you were stopping by a pub. LOL Congratulations on your win in the Poetry Palace contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/19/2011 4:36:00 AM

    Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of linda, John

  1. Date: 5/19/2011 4:04:00 AM

    A Harley at your palace? Some place u got here. Congrats on your win. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/19/2011 2:57:00 AM

    good you dropped in, john... whistling a big cheer for your win! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 9:08:00 PM

    Congrats John on your third place win in my contest with this creative write ..thankxx for your support luv..

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 1:05:00 PM

    Hi, John, after a very long time I read your and that too with this poetic piece of poetry palace, Good luck in the contest