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A Door better left Closed

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A Door better left Closed

   Once she asked me, 
“Why do you care about me? 
   About the life I lead, 
And the girl I am?” 

         I replied, 
 “The love I feel is beyond reach, 
         The world I bought 
Is within you and all I care for 
        Is a part of you.” 

She sat and stared deeply at me 
            (with those shallow brown eyes) 
a whore holding the pipe, 
       a door 
               that releases life. 

A touch of the hands, 
   The castration of the soul. 
The pain of addictions… 
      That we both hold. 

I wish I never found this new friend, 
       The pain she symbolizes, 
   Is the pain I am.

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  1. Date: 5/21/2011 10:05:00 AM
    wonderfully expressed angst, glad you found your way here to the soup

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 2:51:00 PM
    moving and heartbreaking

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 1:11:00 PM
    I like this.