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Just one last time

Search my eyes
before your fingers
brush the piano
Think of me 
with every 
note you play
I'll be gone
 in your early
 tomorrow
There'll be
no rainbow
in the rain.
Yet if you're 
ever lonely,
just remember
Call my name,
Find me 
in the sound
of broken music
I will be there
once again.
Ring of tears
 surrounds
the fire
of my scarlet
tender heart,
yet silence
will conceal my lips,
as We keep
drifting apart.
But,for tonight,
let us be there
one last time,
as your cheek
brushes to my cheek
as your palm
holds unto mine.
Stars will burn
in every evening
and the moon 
will glow each night
Wind whispers
in distance,
in a sentimental voice,
Once I was yours
and you were mine

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  1. Date: 3/4/2012 8:36:00 AM

    Like a tide, it flowed and then it ebbed. Ilike this poem. Have a God day. Dave.

  1. Date: 6/22/2011 5:21:00 PM

    Romantic and soft, loved the lyric.

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 7:56:00 AM

    this is wonderful... And thanx for your sweet comment on my 'Broken Heart'

  1. Date: 6/9/2011 10:13:00 AM

    a very wonderful, well written piece of poetry. thank you for reading and commenting on Caressing White Clouds.

  1. Date: 6/9/2011 7:32:00 AM

    so much more than wonderful to hear from u my sweet friend Celene.. more beautiful a person does not exist and more loyal friend neither.. missing u .we just got home from ten day vaca down seashore.. fabulous .. will be going back this weekend .. 100 degree days for next three..and I LUV it.. heat and sun and beach.. make me so happy.. Ron on the road so am solo till he gets home Saturday early.. how is all with u luv.. ?? your presence is sorely missed here ..luv.

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 9:42:00 AM

    Pss. Smile ~ “Ow, `Sweeet Tinkerbell,` How `Your Beauty` Twirls My Baton Sometimes ~ Glittering Flames Shooting Into The Night Sky Like `The Fourth of July` ~ Swirling In Your Wonderful Pearling of Delicious Delights ~ Come Here, `Gimmie A Kissss` ~ `Love, Always,`” Peter Pan!:) ~

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 6:34:00 AM

    This one tugged at my heart strings.. Could feel every note of sadness.. Beautifully written CC :) hope your weekend will be filled with smiles my friend, love Wilma

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 3:37:00 PM

    Psss. Smile ~ "You Be Good Little Tinkerbell; And Whenever They Let You, You Come Out And Play Ok; Bye Bye!:) ~

  1. Date: 5/30/2011 6:10:00 PM

    Peeking in on mine friend here...as the usual, your words are filled with a passion, to send those deep thoughts of yours to us readers (and,who knows who else) *smiles*...Have a great week love, much love, james

  1. Date: 5/30/2011 9:58:00 AM

    Smile ~ I do not know why but it feels like deja vu; like I have been to this sweeet painting afore? ~ Smile ~ Good to behold, “Your Beauty,” again my dear. ~ And I love this pretty poe; a jewel for the faves. ~ I also noticed “Your Treasures” re in regards unto dear Ruben? Hopefully he'll come to his senses and realize that, there's no place like home, there's no place like home, there's no place like home ~ Smile ~ “My Love to 'You Lovely Tinkerbell, Always,'" John!:) ~

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 8:23:00 AM

    A beautiful romantic write. It sounds like lovers who were once in love but drifted apart. Love it. love phyl

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 9:24:00 PM

    Again a very beautiful romantic poem from you .You have such a spirit for that kind of thing, Celene. WAs glad to see you at my comment box today. Just don't see you as often as before. Do you know what ever became of Rueben?? I miss his poetry.

    Crescent Avatar Celene Crescent Date: 5/27/2011 12:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi andrea,last info about Ruben is that he is busy,and he has another hobby which he's mre addicted to,than poetry,i do miss his poetry too,yet öne can take the horse to the water bt cnt make him drink,he has a talent he can freely use and is feeding it to the pigs,maybe one day he writes again,who knows? I miss you all andrea,and i get back whenever i can,hugs.
  1. Date: 5/24/2011 7:25:00 AM

    This is so melodic, Celeste...Carolyn LED me to it!...Are you expressing your love for music also as you share you reflections on a romance? So relaxing this write! Did you mean conceal ME lips or MY lips...wasn't sure. Keep posting this harmonious work, /gwendolen

    Crescent Avatar Celene Crescent Date: 5/27/2011 12:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tnx GWEN ,I adjusted me to my,caroline is a gem of a poet,i look forward to read your posts too..and yes its about music and romance..thanks so much for reading!
  1. Date: 5/24/2011 6:42:00 AM

    Nice to see you back online, Celene. Hope you'll be posting some new work soon. Sure did enjoy this one. My fishing cruise starts next Monday and I'll be away for nearly a week -- leaving Saturday. Just think! I'll be fishing on our Memorial Day holiday. Hope all is going well for you. Love you, Carolyn

    Crescent Avatar Celene Crescent Date: 5/27/2011 12:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Car did you get my answer?miss you too swt friend,its cool ,we can reply now!
  1. Date: 5/24/2011 6:33:00 AM

    I had to read this one again...very nice CC...TAH

    Crescent Avatar Celene Crescent Date: 5/27/2011 12:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tnx tah wish 2b here mre often :(
  1. Date: 5/14/2011 6:33:00 PM

    suppose a hopeless romantic will always keep the more meaningful treasures near,even as everything else seems to drift.with the wind...:)

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 5:01:00 PM

    What a sexy poem of want and romance. Nicely done and will hit the top of the charts. Excellente! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 4:41:00 PM

    What a very bittersweet and also very vivid write-- I like how you've painted this one, the emotions are quite palpable, beautifully written as always -- hugs to you :)

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 11:06:00 AM

    Sometimes it is very hard to recapture the old feelings of love and passion. Beautifully expressed poem filled with longing and creative images. Doing as best I can, dear, and hope life is going well for you. It seems strange not to be able to communicate with you more often. Love you, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 5:11:00 AM

    Beautiful, yet sad Celene. Have at terrific weekend....:)

  1. Date: 5/13/2011 6:02:00 AM

    A beautiful piece of work. This may be my favorite work of yours CC..A true love write...Hope you have a great weekend!! TAH

  1. Date: 5/13/2011 5:10:00 AM

    A sad recount of a luv since gone Celene in these beautiful emotional words my friend..so glad to see u here again.. the sound of this is a sweet goodbye to something that once was so intense and amazing.. I luv every word ..new fav my sweet friend..luv..