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Your Eyes

Looking into your eyes
I blushed, I turned away
I thought I had invaded your privacy
As though I was inside your body
I saw you naked, fully clothed
I saw past the facade, I was inside
It was beautiful, architecturally sound
The inner beauty was breathtaking
I hope you will invite me back

~Rick

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  1. Date: 6/1/2011 12:55:00 AM

    Wonderful as always, Rick.

  1. Date: 5/12/2011 10:33:00 PM

    Inticing, yet sadly aluring...Loved it!!