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  1. Date: 6/24/2011 11:41:00 AM
    A very pleasant and vividly descriptive write. Some lovely imagery here. Regards, Robert.

  1. Date: 5/20/2011 10:57:00 PM
    what a flavorful poem. I recall reading it before and I love it just as much now! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 5/19/2011 3:46:00 PM
    Ah yes Gautami you have seen, lovely picnics verdant green, my death adder is a warning, it happens though maybe Aussies scorning. i write about bushrangers sometimes on ya mate Don

  1. Date: 5/19/2011 9:43:00 AM
    Dear Gautami, Congratulations on your win in Carol's Picnic Contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 5:45:00 PM
    Guatami, so great to see you at the top of the list with this classic. Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, MOses

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 11:17:00 AM
    HI GUATAMI-Will u still love me if I called you CAROL? I love Carol's work too, but I know this is you!! ha ha. I think my brain is moving slower than my fingers this afternoon...long day at school! Again, this is wonderful and its relaxing properties is something I need to practice more! Your poetry friend- Gwendolen

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    Date: 5/19/2011 10:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nah, no chance I'll not ..sweet !! and I love Carol too, so nice change for awhile :))
  1. Date: 5/18/2011 11:14:00 AM
    Hi Carol- Anything about little girls, piggie tails, and butterflies, count me in-I am gonna love it! I believe you captured so much POETIC MOTION in your winning piece. Much enjoyed. Congratulations- Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 11:10:00 AM
    This is excellent Goutami.Congrats on your win....

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 10:10:00 AM
    ahhhh pigtails and sun bonnets so dreamy! real old school, lovely winning write. Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 9:18:00 AM
    How lovely, Gautami. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 7:55:00 AM
    you're on a rol, gautami.. applause for the gooody win! :) huggs

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 7:17:00 AM
    Many congrats on both your wins, Gautami : )

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 7:03:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, Gautami. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 6:59:00 AM
    My congratulations on the win in the contest of Carol, Gautami

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 6:50:00 AM
    great flow and nicely written, congrats on your win.. cory

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 5:00:00 AM
    Congrats Gautami on your wonderful win in the picnic contest with this delightful write and entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot for excellence today with luv..

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 4:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Gautami. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/13/2011 3:13:00 PM
    Oh, how lovely to see the children as "meandering butterflies" at the picnic, Gautami. It sounds like a perfect day for your family. Best wishes for success in Carol's contest and thanks for your comments. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/12/2011 8:43:00 PM
    wow, this is very COOL and the final verse with its unique imagery was outstanding!!

  1. Date: 5/12/2011 6:04:00 PM
    Wonderful entry for the picnic time, Gautami