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DEEP WATERS

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Below is the poem entitled DEEP WATERS which was written by poet MS.ERICA JACKSON. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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DEEP WATERS

WATER WITH A FISH THAT CANT SWIM?HOW IS THAT? HOW WILL THAT FISH MAKE IT 

WHEN IT SEEMS THE WATER GETS DEEPER?..

EVEN THOUGH THE FISH ISN'T LIKE THE REST..IS IT STILL A KEEPER? 

CAN YOU TEACH THIS FISH THINGS THAT IT WILL CARRY FOR THE DURATION OF THIS 

LIFETIME? 

DOES THE DEEP WATER FORCE THE FISH TO BE SOLO, MOST TIME?

OR DOES IT DISCOURAGE?

DO THE DEEP WATER GIVE COURAGE? 

I HAVE A LOT OF QUESTIONS IT MAY SEEM, BUT THEY ARE ALL LOGICAL! 

TO STEP OUT ON FAITH,YOU ARE TESTING HOW MUCH DEEPER YOU CAN GO WITH OUT 

DROWNING.. 

HOW CAN YOU MOVE THOUGH LIFE WITH OUT FROWNING? 

OPEN YOUR GILLS.EXPLORE THE SEA..ITS SO MUCH TO BE...SO MUCH TO 

SEE...
STAYING STRONG IS KEY!!! 

YOU WONDERING WHO THE FISH IS..... 

WELL I AM SHE. 


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  1. Date: 6/7/2012 1:50:00 PM
    this was written a time back,hope you have travelled the seas and is back with more poems,lol,nice write

  1. Date: 8/9/2011 7:54:00 AM
    This was very nice. Thanks for the visit. I'm so happy I got to read your work today.

    JACKSON Avatar MS.ERICA JACKSON
    Date: 8/12/2011 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    WELL BLESSINGS TO YOU:) THANK YOU FOR EXPRESSING LOVE*
  1. Date: 5/16/2011 5:47:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ms. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 5/11/2011 4:26:00 PM
    i really enjoy reading this poem very inspiring

  1. Date: 5/11/2011 3:23:00 PM
    like they told me "sink or swim"

    JACKSON Avatar MS.ERICA JACKSON
    Date: 5/12/2011 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    well...if you read the poem, sometimes, "sinkin' or swimming" isnt that easy...overcoming fears is what i'm expressing :)