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  1. Date: 9/15/2013 10:58:00 AM
    ...giant ants scratched the spell, quelling his intention! Picnic here not...if you have intentions, eh? See, you took me right there- near the seashore's hut.

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:28:00 AM
    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

  1. Date: 5/20/2011 11:20:00 PM
    ah, only 18. Ah, to be in love again!!(like the young when on a picnic like this that you awesomely described) Congratuations on your win.

  1. Date: 5/19/2011 9:52:00 AM
    Way to go, Nette! Congratulations on your win in Carol's Picnic Contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/19/2011 9:20:00 AM
    This wonderful write on picnic!! Congratulations nette on your win with this beautiful poetic, gautami

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 5:53:00 PM
    Nette, so great to see you on the winner's list with this great one. Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 11:03:00 AM
    Nette On Cloud !! Hurrray on another win!!!

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 10:20:00 AM
    ahhh heaven! to my fav's Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 9:37:00 AM
    Oh those infernal ants. Well a good time was had by all anyway. Congratulations Nette, I enjoyed your poetic presentation. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 8:37:00 AM
    oh dear....... picnicus interruptus........what kind of guy is this Nette, with "four drooling eyes" ?! and "pink arms" ( brushed by your tousled mane of hair).......OH I SEE......... IT'S THE OTHER WAY......OOOOPS SORRY......L O L.....always happy to see you in the rosette circle .....all my fondest wishes

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 7:33:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, nette. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 7:03:00 AM
    My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, nette

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 6:53:00 AM
    congrats on this fabulous write my friend.. cory

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 6:19:00 AM
    Those darn ants! Very much enjoyed

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 5:07:00 AM
    Congrats Nette dear friend on another super win in the picnic contest with this delightful write .. and perfect piece from your creative heart luv.. enjoy another spectacular win with luv.. and may I say ..awesome as always..

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 4:53:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/10/2011 10:56:00 AM
    trust the ants to ruin the moment! ouchy ouchy! but very nice write for the contest Nette -- what picnic isn't complete without the ants! :) hugs to you & will catch up on soupmail soon ok? grabe ang bagaaaaaal ng connection ko, iyak na ko :'(

  1. Date: 5/10/2011 8:11:00 AM
    Would call this Gorgeous! Creativity at its best..Young love picnicking, verdant surroundings... I'd try and forget the ants :) Best of luck in this contest. Love to you nette.

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 5:43:00 PM
    LOL at least you didn't get chased half naked out of a rye field by the neighbors dogs!!! Light & Love [ants have smaller teeth!]

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 12:59:00 PM
    Those awful ants ruin the romantic fun..Enjoyed reading..Good one for the contest..Reads like winners circle for sure..Good luck ...Thanks for stopping by my blog..The Chichuachua is a wild one..She acts like she is part cat..She gets up on top of the couches and chairs..A very different kind of dog for sure..Sara