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Thank you

Everything is spiraling
Nothing solid to grab onto
I’ve lost my faith in people
To him, I say thank you
I feel like I’m losing control
Like everything is falling apart
There’s a hollow, empty feeling
In place of my heart
I don’t know what to do
I don’t know how to feel okay
I feel like I can’t breathe
I want it all to go away

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  1. Date: 5/8/2011 9:28:00 AM
    Desolate, in a poetic way. Written with real feeling. Excellent.

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 10:38:00 PM
    I like when poetry makes me stop and focus when I'm done reading it. This was the case here. Thank you, and I mean that. ;)