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She Can't Even Write, Forever GoOdbye

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Below is the poem entitled She Can't Even Write, Forever GoOdbye which was written by poet Arina Yaqubi. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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She Can't Even Write, Forever GoOdbye

I'm asking myself this question all the time
Why do people even fall in love?

Do they need it or just want to try?
Why do some people start pretending they're in love?

Why do some people fall for some one who's far away?
Some one who doesn't even care

She starts bleeding love
But that guy doesn't even see a single bleeding tear on the ground

But she still wants him with all of her heart
She screams his name at nights

Even though she knows the truth
That he's NOT listening, Just like every time

But, She's lost her heart
Given up all she had for a guy

She would do ANYTHING to have him by her side
While he doesn't even WANT her by HIS side

Is it LOVE ?!
'Cause she'll die

And he won't even know how hard she tried
To make destiny, make him love her by his heart

So she wants to write "Forever GoOdbye"
On her heart

But suddenly she sees and realizes 
That there's NO HEART

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  1. Date: 5/28/2011 7:36:00 PM
    I liked the theme and the simple rendering. Thanks for bringing out the agony of such a relationship which is not uncommon. Luv, jagath

    Yaqubi Avatar Arina Yaqubi
    Date: 5/30/2011 8:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh, thank you!!! :)
  1. Date: 5/24/2011 4:38:00 PM
    That's excellent! Keep on creating!

    Yaqubi Avatar Arina Yaqubi
    Date: 5/25/2011 12:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank youuu....!!! :)
  1. Date: 5/24/2011 4:21:00 AM
    ongratulations on your poem being featured this week, Arina

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 4:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Arina. Love, Carol

    Yaqubi Avatar Arina Yaqubi
    Date: 5/23/2011 6:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much...!!! xoXO
  1. Date: 5/22/2011 8:13:00 PM
    Congrats Arina on your featured poem this week on P.S. a great one to share with us all with luv..

    Yaqubi Avatar Arina Yaqubi
    Date: 5/23/2011 6:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanx...A lot...!!! :)
  1. Date: 5/6/2011 5:05:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Arina. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol