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TORN BETWEEN TWO LOVERS

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TORN BETWEEN TWO LOVERS

I'm sitting here all alone,
emotions numb, with words  you've shown.
You chose to leave our bed last night,
precious time wasted, to hold me tight....

I'm still in shock of what you said,
how you cared for her, when tears she shed?
You're probably right, when you confessed,
you shouldn't have pulled me into your mess!...

You honestly believe that it's okay?
to care for lovers, that went away.
I ask if it, would be alright,
if I cared this much for an "ex" tonight?...

You lie and say it wouldn't bother you!
if I showed compassion, while he's so blue.
I'm lost in thoughts of how to feel?
your words ring loud, as they reveal....

"You care for her, is what you say",
those words still sting, I must convey.
What was I thinking?.. to let you in,
my heart is broken yet again....

I don't need lovers, from past gone by,
to talk me through tears I cry.
The way I see it, they had their chance,
but you need 'her' more, than our romance...
                      Go figure?....

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  1. Date: 11/29/2012 7:57:00 AM
    It's TOO hard to figure I agree! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/21/2011 8:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your featured poem this week Dixie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 12:21:00 AM
    Good job on this. I agree. Exes are exes for a reason:D R.M.

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    Date: 6/7/2011 10:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Matt!.....Thanks for your positve comments..and for just stoppin in to take a look.....thanks again....SugarbearUSA.......:)
  1. Date: 5/13/2011 12:54:00 PM
    ooo, dixie,,, i think i will come back and read all your poems... reading this one before i head out.. i like the way you point out his stupid flaws.... we can do better... take care,..p.d.

    fallin Avatar dixie fallin
    Date: 6/7/2011 10:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Destroyer!...Thank you much for stoppin in to read this one..I do hope you come back soon...I appreciate every comment I recieve......ty again.......SugarbearUSA.......:)
  1. Date: 5/13/2011 12:46:00 PM
    * “First I Wish Apologize For The Typos In My First Com * Dear Beautiful Dixie Fallin * Second I Would Like to Say That * I LovVve What I See In This * Beautiful Poetess * If Not Evolved Then Thus * I Also Love The Depth I Find * Which Makes Your Lovely Gifted Light * Twice As Bright * Keep Banking The Pages With Sweeet * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Sarah” ~

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 10:34:00 AM
    A good poem -very touching and bold. Sincerity and devotion are pre-requisites of love. May your life be filled with sincere love. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 5/5/2011 10:18:00 AM
    What a beautiful afternoon I am enjoying reading poetry here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to see yours among those which I am able to read this afternoon Dixie. May the sun shine down upon you and bring joy into your life today and always. Love, Carol