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The Silver Outline

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The Silver Outline

" And God took a handful of southerly wind, blew his breath upon it and created the horse." ~ Bedoin Legend In the magical moonlight The silver outline you see; Is a greyish white Mustang, A wild horse I am. Rambling free in the vast grasslands... The long coarse skeins, my dark grey manes; Dwells the blustering wind. Early dawn When air is wrapped in fleecy clouds, I swim in the silent waters deep. Mermaid locks leave behind a trail. A canter, that's a hush, a heart that mellows; Yet so strong , yet so rugged. Thunder in the mountains, Rolling fierce rain. No fear I know, As I go galloping, pacing long wild grasses.. Waves in a stormy sea. Artists for eons strove, To hold in their brushes Lightning beauty. Spirit unlassoed, in my knowing eyes Hid behind my long eyelashes white. Mystery unfathomable, In my heart lies; Wings which unfurl as I fly, Taming the wind, blowing a gale. Wild horse of the prairies, I am. ~ 4th place win in the contest For PD's : "My Best Pet or Animal Poem" Honorable Mention For kristen bruni's contest : "If I Was Animal What Would I Be?" Written by Gautami Phookan

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  1. Date: 12/13/2013 10:34:00 AM
    Beautiful poem Gautami! :) G.

  1. Date: 9/23/2011 3:08:00 PM
    I really enjoyed riding along on this wonderful write again, Gautami! How have you been? It has been a long time, I actually was wondering about you just the other day-- I haven't been too active at the Soup lately, heehee... so nice to hear from you and I hope all is well-- thank you for passing by my writes-- heehee sorry I am being weird, I just get crazy with changing my names, even if I totally LOVE my name, haha! :D enjoy your weekend!

  1. Date: 7/5/2011 4:39:00 AM
    An excellent write, with strong poetic imagery. Congratulations on being a winner! Robert.

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 3:08:00 PM
    ahhh a sweet write. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/9/2011 10:29:00 AM
    Congratulations on a well deserved win in poet Destroyer's "Best Pet Or Animal Poem" contest Gautami. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 11:28:00 PM
    I am galloping along beside u in the sea of long grass here, Guatami...this was my childhood fantasy, to be a horse! Your choice of words to describe the mystical side of this creature is spectacular! It is so true that spirits of horses are often unlassoed...taming the wind? How imaginative is this line....very smooth...flowing...This is my glowing review! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 1:40:00 PM
    Amazing write. Sending congrats to you, Gautami : )

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 12:58:00 PM
    great job in contest Luv*Skat

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 9:28:00 AM
    Congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., gautami

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 9:03:00 AM
    Another win for this terrific poem, Gautami! Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 8:25:00 AM
    A very worthy winner, Gautami. I enjoyed this smooth write. :-)

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 8:19:00 AM
    Congrats Gautami on another terrific win with this wonderful write in the contest my friend.. luv.

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 8:00:00 AM
    Interesting write. Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 6:16:00 AM
    this was very good congrats on your win. cory

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 7:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Kristen's contest Gautami. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/21/2011 12:20:00 PM
    Fascinating - love it. Many congrats on your win, Gautami : )

  1. Date: 5/20/2011 9:39:00 PM
    I am with Kash on this one. it was amazing, Gautami!!

  1. Date: 5/20/2011 8:50:00 PM
    Ooooh mystical and beautiful Gautami. Many congrats.

  1. Date: 5/20/2011 6:41:00 PM
    Congrats Gautami on your win.This one is worthy of higher placement.

  1. Date: 5/20/2011 3:33:00 PM
    the horse.. so graceful and intense like you! relish your win and congrats , gautami.. :0 huggs

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