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Two homeless orphans

Two homeless orphans

are begging on the street

and dreaming

about homely comfort

and cozy parents love.

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  1. Date: 5/4/2011 7:06:00 AM

    I don't know what happened to the format but this is it: line 1 two homeless orphans line 2 share homey comfort dreams line 3 and parents with love line 4 where streets do not beg

  1. Date: 5/4/2011 7:03:00 AM

    two homeless orphans share cozy comfort dreams and parents with love where streets do not beg Just rewording your poem for more *poetic punch*. Take it if you find it *useful*. ~Anna