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The wedding rehearsal

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The wedding rehearsal

She and mirror had a chat
dreams and hopes flitted past
vainly smiled and said goodbye
brides here are fully covered 
Veiled for life...




Afroze Ali

(Some brides from remote parts of India are covered head to toe, red veils reaching their chins and they are supposed to veil themselves every time a man is around. Ridiculous, but true)





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  1. Date: 5/17/2011 10:41:00 PM

    are you from INdia then? I like this one a lot. Congrats on your HM. Yours was certainly not the least of the bunch by any means. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 5:44:00 PM

    Afroze, Congratulations on your poem's honored success in Dr Ram's contest. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 2:16:00 PM

    I didn't know this, Afroze. It's interesting learning about wedding customs in other countries. Congratulations on your success in Dr. Ram's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 1:23:00 PM

    Congrats Afroze on your HM in the Wedding Rehearsal contest with this wonderful entry luv.. enjoy your special honor...

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 12:53:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win in Dr. Ram's contest Afroze. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 12:08:00 PM

    Congratulations on the HM win in my contest, Afroze

  1. Date: 5/3/2011 12:48:00 PM

    Thanks for the entry to my contest, Afroze

  1. Date: 5/3/2011 5:13:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Afroze. I will be back again soon to read more. May the sun shine down on you and bring great joy to your life now and always. Love, Carol