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Falls On Me

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Falls On Me

My soul is cold,
  Oh, so cold            it makes you numb.

This feeling never goes,
and no one really know's
      How much hate is in this world.

Your eye's shine
a crystal glazed mist,
and in your mind
       you put all the blame on me.

I accept your pain
    and raise you defeat,
Oh, how the catacomb rhythym
in which your heart sings to me.

Still it cannot erase
           yesterday,
and you long for peace~
A peace you will never find.

In my heart
is where it all lay,
and until you open up
Your pathetic excuse for truth and honesty,

                                      Will always consume the one's you love!

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  1. Date: 5/3/2011 12:32:00 AM
    Carol, Thank you, and I am glad you enjoyed. I hope in turn you, as well, have a wonderful week filled with health, love, and inspiration. I have not gotten a chance to read any of your writing's, but I am heading that way now!! ;)

  1. Date: 5/3/2011 12:28:00 AM
    Drake, Thank you, it is often found as we go through life that few will listen to the deepest words of our hearts. My only hope is eventually the person to whom I speaking about in all my writings will look back oneday and think that somehow what I said actually did come to pass and was true. Thank you for your wonderful comments, and actually seeing the true meaning behind my words. ;)

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 1:51:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your poetry today Dana. I will be back again soon to read more. Have a wonderful week filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 5:24:00 AM
    Powerful. Damn. I express a similar message to those important to me also. Few ever listen though. I feel this. Great job, Dana!