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Real dreams

Waking to the sound of rain.
Watching it trickle down the glass pane.

Walking into the kitchen and pouring some hot tea
Standing by the sliding glass doors and staring at a reflection of me.

Wishing I was outside dancing with the storm and the trees.
smelling the air filled with dampness and wrapping myself in the breeze.

Running into the wet forest with nothing but my bare feet.
Stumbling upon a lake so vivid and meek.

Holding myself in the rain as I twirl in bliss.
Waking from my dream I realize all of this.

It was a magical dream where everything was easy and free.
It was beautiful but yet so real to me.


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  1. Date: 5/3/2011 5:35:00 AM

    Thank you James.

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 10:27:00 AM

    A fantastical write dear poet ! Loved ever word ! Have a fantastic day....much love, james

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 9:56:00 AM

    Thank you so much (: Means alot to recieve wondeful comments.

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 9:34:00 AM

    Nice Couplet, love the imagery, love to walk in the rain, if it would just warm up. Your poem brings back wonderful memories. Good work Judy

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 9:26:00 AM

    Roxanna, wonderful couplets... thanks you for the awesome imagery on a dream so real... enjoyed.. p.d.