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A Green Veil

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A crowd of pink flamingos move about,
The green rushes that grow in a veil.

The pond is wet,
And all that surrounds the pond,
Is wet.

With that pink in air,
And green in air...

Green heads bent,
A pair of mallards float in damp mist.

In a fairytale realm,
Nature rests;
Where green rushes grow, 
In soft ruffles of a veil.


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3rd place in the contest
For Brian Strand's contest :"Any Form Max 14 lines"




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  1. Date: 6/6/2011 10:22:00 AM

    Congrats Gautami on your third place win in the contest with this extraordinary entry luv..wow..

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 1:14:00 PM

    this one hits the roof, gautami! captivating! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 12:51:00 AM

    Very interesting images you bring here, Gautami-- I really like the thought of that green veil, lends a sort of surreal glow to your poem...:D

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 8:25:00 AM

    Nice selections of birds with nice perspective , gautami

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 8:03:00 AM

    Lovely, Gautami, I am also inspired by birds lately, have several poems in the progress on the theme of birds~~