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Chinese Takeaway

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Chinese Takeaway

Beef and black bean sauce with rice 
Hungry big wide eyes
Struggle to use chop sticks well
Its just fun to try
Satisfyingly 
I'm so full
Burp!



29th April 2011
Contest : 	Fast Food Epulaeryu
4th place win

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  1. Date: 5/7/2011 6:57:00 AM

    Congratulations Emma on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 2:30:00 AM

    the last line blew me away, emma... greeaaat stuff with my best winning cheers! :) hugggs!

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 8:48:00 PM

    Congratulations, Emma. I sure liked this one.

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 3:15:00 PM

    Good job. Congrats.

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 2:36:00 PM

    Loved this the first time I read it, Emma, and am so glad to see it in the winners' circle. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 1:32:00 PM

    Many congrats on your win, Emma : )

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 12:46:00 PM

    Congrats Emma on your win in this contest. I don't take beef so for me chicken with rice does fine..Nice write chopsticks and all..Love, gautami

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 11:58:00 AM

    Lovely write.Congrats Emma on your win---kash

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 8:17:00 AM

    Hey Emma. Congrats on this fast food hit! I struggled to eat with chop sticks as I read it in Chinese. Lol. Everything about this poem is great and I hope many others enjoy it as much as I did. Blessings, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 3:58:00 AM

    As amused as the one attempting to use her chopsticks, this is great stuff. Thanks for supporting my 2nd contest. .......BURP! ha ha. Hilarious. Blessings-We have so much to be thankful for this beautiful Monday. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/29/2011 3:58:00 PM

    I adore chinese although not sure I had this kind of it before. Hope you do well in the contest, emma!

  1. Date: 4/29/2011 9:24:00 AM

    LOL It really is a challenge to try using chopsticks, Emma. Enjoyed this delightful epulaeryu. Best wishes in Gwendolen's contest! Love, Carolyn